A place to sort of anonymously try out my talents and gifts as a writer. I had a wonderful 5th grade teacher who made me believe I could write. She told me "keep on writing". So here goes...read and respond to help me grow.
Thursday, June 23, 2011
While You Were Gone
Dear Daddy,
Tonight I get to spend my first night with Grandma and Grandpa, it has been great. When I got here Grandma had bought me a walker to play in when I am over here, I don't know how to move it yet, but maybe one day soon! Grandma was loving all over me, of course! Then Grandpa came home and we went out to meet him. He was so excited to see me, it was his first time this visit. It wasn't long before Aunt Jen showed up! I seem to be a popular guy around here.
After I listened to Grandpa play his horn some, and giggled at the kitty cat as we got to know each other, they packed me up and took me out to eat....you guessed it, pizza! And yes Daddy, it was at your favorite place. Grandma had white pizza and she even let me taste her sweet tea and a little itty bit of ricotta. It was good...and I kept begging for more. I was getting tired and a little cranky, but you would be proud of me, I was a good boy. Everyone was admiring me of course!
When we got home Grandma got me ready for bed. I had a nice warm bottle. Grandma was pretty funny, I caught her reading the directions on the can. Apparently, back when you were a baby it was breast milk all the way….right to the cup! Good thing that isn’t the case with me, or Grandma wouldn’t have been blessed with my over night stay. She was telling me stories about when you were little and how she can't believe I am your little boy. She seems a little confused by some of the things I use…like the car seat. It seems yours was a little different. And you should have seen how amazed she was with the Puffs. She seemed to act a little silly watching me eat them, like they were the best things ever created.
Before I fell asleep we talked about how much she thinks you miss me. I know you must Daddy, because I miss you. Mommy and Grandma show me your picture and I try to kiss it. I love you Daddy and I am so proud of you. Thank you for working hard to take care of me and Mommy…even while you’re out protecting the rest of the world. You will be home soon and we can ALL be together! I can't wait. I feel all better now, I just wish these teeth would come in and my gums would stop hurting. Grandma Mary says I will get one this Sunday...just for you. Happy Father's Day Daddy. It is your first you know! I sure wish we could be together to celebrate it.
I love you bunches and bunches. Grandma sends her love too....oh and Grandpa too. I will tell you how the morning goes!
Love you,
Your first born son
Thursday, June 16, 2011
Beauty is Not Always Enough
Physical beauty.
It can open doors - and can also shut them.
Write a scene in which a physically beautiful character is somehow impacted by that trait.
Staring eyes were mesmerized as her feet hit the sand. Feminine, that hold you captive, hair flowing and the kind of body you find on covers of magazine. She scanned the beach, a routine she knew well…east and west. And she spotted him. A masculine beauty that matched hers.
It can open doors - and can also shut them.
Write a scene in which a physically beautiful character is somehow impacted by that trait.
Staring eyes were mesmerized as her feet hit the sand. Feminine, that hold you captive, hair flowing and the kind of body you find on covers of magazine. She scanned the beach, a routine she knew well…east and west. And she spotted him. A masculine beauty that matched hers.
She walked closer to make sure. No ring. No additional towel or baggage nearby. And her closer look revealed his chiseled tan body and she wondered about the eyes that lie beneath the glasses. His head shifted in her direction and she smiled the smile. He turned away.
A little surprised by this action, new to her, she assumed he was a little shy. She positioned herself perfectly in his direct line and began the disrobing. She kicked each sandal off. The shorts she shimmied left and right, her hips moving with the action. Not too quick. Not too slow. She unbuttoned one at a time, a little slower action now. And pulled the sleeves with purposeful movements, and revealed her bikini. Her dance continued like a bird…wings moving, eyes averting, a smile just gentle on her lips. Out came the oil, and she began to spread it across her abdomen…arms and legs. She would look and catch his eyes in her direction.
Her confidence was dwindling though. He would turn away. He was looking at other sites, and didn’t seem drawn to her. She lay back and began to imagine all the reasons why he must be ignoring her.
Recent breakup and his heart still hurting?
Actually in love and faithful…hmmm.
Doesn't like women? No way.
His girlfriend is meeting him and doesn’t want to get caught.
She glanced back and again, and she thought she saw him peeking. I do think that’s it. Well, I can take care of that.
She went down to the water and gracefully flirted with the waves, toes in. Then dove in deeper and deeper. She swam with the grace of a ballerina. She fought the current to stay in his vision.
Then with the mindset of a snake, she methodically walked back to her towel. Using every inch of her body to entice.
But she slithered onto the towel, wanting to bury her head in the sand. He wasn’t biting. No reaction. No smile. No introductions. So she lay back and let the sun burn away the broken pride.
Not long after her thoughts were interrupted by conversation. She could hear a female voice. She was right…a girlfriend. But the conversation was quick and then gone. She didn’t look up, no need for reminders.
Then she heard steps in the sand…and there were more than two. Walking towards her.
Suddenly a wet nose nuzzled into her neck and she jumped and shouted…and found herself looking into the eyes of a German Shepherd. Her eyes followed…nose…to collar…to leash….to HIM!
And all the facts came tumbling in. BLIND!
His words came smooth and inviting, “ Hi there…I have been wanting to get over here for a while now”…and he motioned with his head to the dog. “I needed my guide.”
“Over here?” her words whispered out with some effort.
“Um yeah…you see, us blind guys…we have quite the sense of hearing. And by the reactions of the guys around me…and the girls with them. ..I take it you are a real beauty. “
She blushed…immediately realizing, he wouldn’t see. She found for the first time…she was going to have to let him see the beauty from within.
Now this is going to be a challenge……
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